1) Copy and paste your feedback from the email in full - WWW, EBI and LR.
https://arkingcsemedia.blogspot.com/2019/11/industry-and-audience-power-essay.html
2) What was the word count for your essay?
1,127 words in total
3) What was your strongest paragraph? Why do you think it was better than others?
I think it was the music industry as i explained how people who can sing a play instruments can have a potential of being part of a successful band or artist
4) What was your weakest paragraph? Why do you think it wasn't as good as others?
I think it was my TV and industry as i forgot to include due to that paragraph being lost and i had to re write it and it was a last minute paragraph
5) How can you improve your extended writing in GCSE Media Studies in future?
Try to include more media terminology and try to explain things in more detail and read the question properly so that i don't forget to add a certain paragraph
6) Write ONE thing you have learned about the internet, audience and industry from completing this essay.
That the internet can grant anyone a certain amount of power and can let them accomplish many different tasks and reach certain levels of respect and recognition.
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